Today’s focus will be on replacing said with emotionally happy words:
Laughed
“What’s that on your head?” he laughed.
Joked
“And you thought you were too short to reach the jar,” he joked.
Jested
“I should call you Buffy, with how you handled that vamp,” she jested, punching my arm.
Cheered
“You can do it!” he cheered.
Sang
“What a beautiful day,” she sang.
Rejoiced
“Oh, thank you,” she rejoiced, taking the coffee from my hands.
Smiled
“You’re on smart cookie, yah know that,” he smiled then, before giving me a wink.
Marvelled
“Oh wow! They really did that!” the child marvelled, after Jim finished his side of the story.
Beamed
“Don’t worry, grumpy gills, every things going to be fine,” she beamed, leaning forward on her toes towards me.
Giggled
“Hey, stop that!” the little girl giggled, swatting at her older brother who continued to attack her with his wiggling spider-like fingers.
Chimed
“No, I agree,” he chimed.
November 28, 2015 at 10:33 am
Yeah!!!! He echoed! π
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November 28, 2015 at 4:27 pm
Fun to read, even though I disagree. If your characters say lively, realistic things, you don’t need to label their words as sighs, murmurs or shouts. She scolded primly.
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November 28, 2015 at 5:51 pm
“Sure, there is a use for said, but sometimes people get into the he said she said slump and these can help them in that case,” she replied.
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November 28, 2015 at 6:45 pm
Great post. I’d love to see more of these. The word “said” is so cliche. π
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November 28, 2015 at 9:52 pm
It has its uses but sometimes it’s nice to change it up. π
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